Brief Notes on "Kire-ji"
| furu-ike ya |
kawazu tobikomu |
mizu no oto @(Basho) |
| old pond |
frog jumps in |
sound of splash |
This one is so popular that you never fail to know about it in your study of haiku.
The old pond has long been confined in a winter scene. This haiku conveys a fresh breath and an expanding joy of early spring with the sound of splash.
"Ya" that follows "furu-ike" is called "kire-ji" or "cutoff word" and plays an extremely important role in this haiku: "ya" delivers a clear image of an old pond deserted in a gloomy winter field and spares wordy description.
Let me explain a little more about kire-ji."Ya","kana","keri", or "nari" and other kire-ji effectively add to the author's feeling in a short haiku or speak for omitted words. Kire-ji, in this respect, provides a structural support for haiku. While not a few in number, those without kire-ji still inherit the refined traditions and rhythm of kire-ji as modified over time. Examples are such works of haiku as are noted for refined sharpness. Haiku that values omission always seeks perfection by use of kire-ji or its concept, I think.
Please note an established rule that kire-ji is used just once in a haiku. Two kire-ji might blur the message of a short poem of 17 sylla-bles.